just that some plot points are too fast and it ends up consuming the coherence of the story, like the tension between the groups or the sex deal with the main couple- there was not much substance as to why the uke just suddenly stripped and serviced the seme when he said the repercussion is inevitable, like didn't he dislike the attempted rape in the prev chap? Also the issue is not with the seme in the first place, it's with the oyaji so how tf will seme stop that dude if like he said, the oyaji will fight back simply because he likes fighting in general and would practically take any reason to do it? I appreciate that it focused on romance and did in a way that isn't too lovey dovey and gag-inducing however the other essence of the plot suffered for it instead. Solid 4/5 coz of the pretty characters and beautiful artstyle.
just that some plot points are too fast and it ends up consuming the coherence of the story, like the tension between the groups or the sex deal with the main couple- there was not much substance as to why the uke just suddenly stripped and serviced the seme when he said the repercussion is inevitable, like didn't he dislike the attempted rape in the prev chap? Also the issue is not with the seme in the first place, it's with the oyaji so how tf will seme stop that dude if like he said, the oyaji will fight back simply because he likes fighting in general and would practically take any reason to do it? I appreciate that it focused on romance and did in a way that isn't too lovey dovey and gag-inducing however the other essence of the plot suffered for it instead. Solid 4/5 coz of the pretty characters and beautiful artstyle.