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imma rant about this (and these type of bls in general) BECAUSE I LIKE TO WASTE MY TIME AN...

fairy dust December 13, 2023 10:07 pm

imma rant about this (and these type of bls in general) BECAUSE I LIKE TO WASTE MY TIME AND BE HATEFUL usual sh¡tty bl with a sh¡t "plot" that only exists to make them have s3x. it's got weird ahh k¡nks and the dynamic is off, the backstory doesn't make sense, it's confusing and isnt explained well because it serves less than zero purpose here. this story exists for one reason only and it's painful to see just how clear the author made that through their bad writing. it's a mess. the art isn't horrible. just the forgettable, bland, copy and paste type of art.

it's so obvious the author started writing this with ZERO clue and zero plan, other than the s3x scenes, which are horrible as well? not just unconsented but gross and weird too? like, if this is gonna be smut only, then make it good smut. but the athor couldn't even do that. good for you if you are into vomit and piss (actually not good for you but thats sth to discuss with your therapist), but i guess there are 'decent' ways, as decent as f3tishes like that can get i guess, to write about that stuff. but this? it wouldnt even be hot for people who are into this atrocity.

the author obviously cannot decide on their dynamic and has no clue on how to shape a good, likable character whom you can empathize with. the black haired guy has big t¡ts, is painfully unfunny and SO unlikable that i feel nothing when hes getting hurt. his reactions don't make sense, he contradicts himself every two panels, he's a b¡tch and i could not hate him more.

even the 'evil' male lead is so boring and one dimensional, i didnt even know it was possible to make a villainous and wicked type of character THIS boring. evil characters CAN be likable even if they do horrible things when you write them correctly and give them a reasonable, good-paced, interesting arc that makes you doubt yourself and stress over them. but this long haired dumbledore looking ahh mf has NOTHING that could make me possibly evoke some kind of genuine interest or liking for him. i dont know why the author thinks he looks badass when she makes him smile 'maliciouslu', get this goofy dude off my screen, what is he evn doing?? the only reason i prefer the black haired dude is because at least he makes me FEEL something (which is utter hate and disgust), but this guy makes me feel empty and hollow. absolutely nothing.

it just keeps switching back and forth between senseless dialog, unnecessary s3x, and dialog again that doesn't feel like the same two stupid characters but an even more horrible version of them. i dont feel anything for these surface-level, cliché, boring and bland characters, i couldnt care less about what happens to them because this is badly written and there is nothing to like about this. (obviously bl obsessed and gay fetishising teenage girls will still find a way to like this for the "plot" but thats not my problem ig)

i feel so pissed that i even dedicated so much time of my life writing this. this story does not deserve ANYTHING, not even hateful reviews. please please start writing good, dark romance stories again, or at least something that wont make me want to smash my head against the wall like this sh¡tty and forgettable and messy manhwa !!!

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