nah seriously….
yes im a hater, yes i was waiting for someone to comment this.
real
the cringe is intentional. i also kinda cringe at myself when i make a chapter.
but personally, that's what makes it funny. what's the point of worrying about the cringe when you only live once? my entire life is cringe, and so-- my humor is as equally cringe
anyways, go on, keep reading and embrace the cringe. that's how we do it in delusionaltown. please keep hating too, i personally find reading them fun.
it’s just unfunny, hope this helps<3
>>>its blatantly homophobic (and ableist)
help-- they're literally gay? i'm in no way hating on gays, i just imply kdj's gay.
anyways, if you're talking about the first chapter, i'm not even the one who came up with the lines. and I don't see where i'm being ableist?
i'm thinking you probably just read first chapter. if not, alright. not forcing you to read it, just encouraging for you to do so. i do my best to make funny lines without being harmful in anyway.
if the 'ableist' thing is about the line, 'go away brain monsters, i took my meds today!' i'm playing on this joke of taking meds, a very popular joke. i like to think whoever yelled this line is just a poor guy on the end of his wits, hallucinating due to extreme study/work stress and on medications. i kinda feel bad for him though.
if it's about the schizo thing, i'm sorry about it. i didn't mean for it to be that way, I'm trying to get across kdj's weird thinking that took inspiration from nicole's from class of 09. it's more of a dismissive thing of him thinking he finally gone completely insane after reading the same novel for 10+ years. which is, kinda a normal way of thinking for a person who thinks in satire.
if any jokes that comes across as a bad thing, please point it out. if it's bad enough, I'll change it. if not, I can explain to you why they're not that.
i’ve only read through the first two chapters so:
- first of all, you making joongdok gay doesn’t automatically absolve you of being homophobic and homophobia can extend beyond “hatred”. eg prejudice
>> a lot of the jokes being made degrade and sexualise gay men
>> homophobic terms and phrases
- making derogatory jokes about mental illness is ableist, no matter the intention. it “being popular” or “inspo” isn’t an excuse lmao
alr, i'll improve the storytelling on these parts. thanks for the feedback.
tbh kinda cringe