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honestly surprisingly good story? their characters are very interesting and it's refreshin...

fairy dust December 16, 2023 2:15 pm

honestly surprisingly good story? their characters are very interesting and it's refreshing to see just two complex stupid men start liking each other. while the 'trope' may be a bit cliché, it's got lots of original bits and that's what's important.
there's some stuff that irritates me though. their first s3x scene was a drunk one and that makes it kinda unconsented but honestly, the author managed to do it very well. like, still checking up on each other throughout of it. and the morning after, the blonde guy didn't straight up regret it, so he was still by his senses when it happened. so i guess that makes it a little better.
also, i WISH the author worked on their character arcs a bit differently. the blonde started out with despising the brown haired guy, and it progresses to him really liking him. the problem is that this kinda happened in one day, at the beach. it's just odd how someone can go from very strong hatred to mild liking in one single day. there should've been hella more chapters in between, with his liking starting out as mere curiosity, while still concealing his feelings. and then it would've went on much smoother. but yeah, it doesn't bother me that much.
i think it's good that the blonde isn't opening up right away. their dynamics fit oddly well together, their problems and traumas aren't all that is interesting about them, and the filler scenes are just wholesome and adorable. i don't even read that much bl except for a few expectations, but this one is surprisingly well done, except for a few things that can be overlooked.

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