I see what the author was going for but it's so messy and rushes feeling and some things aren't addressed properly. I found myself confused too many times like I didn't know they had sex during heat cause it was rushed over... Overall good story but extremely rushed.
I see what the author was going for but it's so messy and rushes feeling and some things aren't addressed properly. I found myself confused too many times like I didn't know they had sex during heat cause it was rushed over... Overall good story but extremely rushed.