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agreed, the characters couldve had so much more potential, the story aswell, and it ended all just being written so poorly...
the plot has literal plot holes, so much info missing and as you said, childish behaviours.
authors writing is the equivalent of a 50 yo man writing a movie script about 16 yo teenage girls, like bro...
Am I reading the same thing as everyone else. I read cause I'm like I want to see it through. But its just a childish plot and back and forth lack of story. I understand they fell in love with each other at sight but they have no chemistry at all none of the characters do they are just piled with each other.
It's starts of with seme a sex addict( which I'm not judging just stating a fact) have sex with a support character that has nothing to really do with the plot. Or maybe cause it's only 30+ chapters that I don't know. Then he sees the uke who he met by chance. Who is very depressed and have a mental disorder. (Again not judging) they hated each other. They didn't have those moments them falling in love without involving other. One what gives him the right to search someone's background but also don't know about him and gets upset when he finds out. That whole part just confused and werid me out cause back another side character unless this story had some other story to mix they don't have real chemistry either. Like okay rich dude with a complex of putting together guys. Which i hope that's not all. Like how did they meet or how did he know the uke. What did he mean when he wants them to act friendly with each other. And the seme is so arrogant( not that's its a problem it's just add flame to the fire)
Then about the uke he is a naive save me character. He doesn't have good memories and when ever the seme meets him they surround with the darkside of everything. Like it's 44 chapters other then the times they ate out the have no really other scene that have moments that didn't results in him getting angry, sad or just upset.
They fell for each others looks nothing qrong with that but I feel.like the chemistry isn't there.
And I stopped when I saw the (I chased him for 15 years) you called him a coward or got mad at him but also you didn't confessed. But if he and him had scenes together like him trying to go on dates secretly then okay. But you went into to straight touching and getting on his nerves. Ugh.
None of these characters act without thinking first it's always about them cause they are impatient or scared.
I LOVE MY FAIR SHARE OF TOXIC RELATIONSHIPS
BUT THIS ISNT. ALL OF THIS JUST FALSE THOUGHTS OF HOW A RELATIONSHIPS. MAYBE I JUST HATE HOW ITS NOT CREATIVE ENOUGH.
I WASNT GOING TO ACTUALLY POST THIS BUT I THINK I LET OUT ALL I WANTED. TO REVIEW THIS. BUT ITS SO BIAS.