Only redeeming aspect of this is the art work. what in the world is this ? haha - A MC who's personality does a 180 and goes from cowardly and weak, to arrogant and showing off within the span of 10 chapters is WILD ! literally feels like a brand new person, no organic transformation or development at all - The MC's arrogance is weird and displaced for a none-fighter character transitioning into a fighter -Why do the characters over explain when they talk- probably the way it was translated and cleaned up. It feels like 70% of what each character is saying should be a thought bubble instead. - The MC using the fact that he 'brings misfortune to others' because of one bad incident is such a stretch, especially using it as a reason to isolate himself -The story feels oddly plot-less, like the story was just written to be written, no goal, lack of organic from MC and typical women aimlessly falling for the MC -It's also really difficult to take this story seriously when there is excess cleavage and skin on show for the women only when it is most definitely not needed. It's so frustrating when a powerful women is dressed against her character - make it make sense !
I COULD GO ONN, but I'd rather spend the rest of my time finding something better to read :)
Only redeeming aspect of this is the art work. what in the world is this ? haha
- A MC who's personality does a 180 and goes from cowardly and weak, to arrogant and showing off within the span of 10 chapters is WILD ! literally feels like a brand new person, no organic transformation or development at all
- The MC's arrogance is weird and displaced for a none-fighter character transitioning into a fighter
-Why do the characters over explain when they talk- probably the way it was translated and cleaned up. It feels like 70% of what each character is saying should be a thought bubble instead.
- The MC using the fact that he 'brings misfortune to others' because of one bad incident is such a stretch, especially using it as a reason to isolate himself
-The story feels oddly plot-less, like the story was just written to be written, no goal, lack of organic from MC and typical women aimlessly falling for the MC
-It's also really difficult to take this story seriously when there is excess cleavage and skin on show for the women only when it is most definitely not needed. It's so frustrating when a powerful women is dressed against her character - make it make sense !
I COULD GO ONN, but I'd rather spend the rest of my time finding something better to read :)