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Well. It looks like Mingwa really does suck in writing and uses the stupidest tricks to lu...

akiraben January 3, 2024 12:55 pm

Well. It looks like Mingwa really does suck in writing and uses the stupidest tricks to lure teen girls with their brains drown in hormones in. Why creating a decent story and thinking about flow, character development, plot arcs etc, when you can throw a "concerned glance from jk"-"excessive blushing of dan" bone to the audience and that alone will make them melt.

I just, unfortunately, have to admit that me and a lot of clearly thinking people here were right about the path Mingwa would take from now on with this project.

Lazy. Pathetic. Toxic. Abuse-praising. Built on boring and unoriginal, yet commercially profitable artstyle. Aimed on some thirsty folks who would love it even if it was just an NSFW art book without all these telling-the-story attempts.

At this point the only thing Mindwa can do to make this story unpredictable is to kill one of ml in a freak accident or involve some alien invasion with the plot, for God's sake. All the other scenarios are so obvious and LAZY that it's totally disrespectful towards readers.

Responses
    jjj January 3, 2024 12:49 pm

    Dude chill it ain’t that deep

    akiraben January 3, 2024 12:54 pm
    Dude chill it ain’t that deep jjj

    It doesn't have to be to be at least a 3+ story
    It's a pity you can be fed a pile of shit and be fine with it (=・ω・=)

    Heya January 3, 2024 1:05 pm

    Honestly I hate to say things about authors negatively since it takes a lot of work,but I agree. This story has great art which could have been used for a 100 other webtoons or even novels that can be turned into webtoons and yet its used for this....