The storytelling is choppy and isn't smooth. I would have liked to see more of how the king and the bodyguard realises their feelings for each other. I felt it was suddenly forced on the readers that they have feelings for each other without showing the actual development. The pacing of the story is fast. The story gets better in the later chapters. I liked the ending very much. Everyone's ending was justified and got just the right amount of what they deserved.
The storytelling is choppy and isn't smooth. I would have liked to see more of how the king and the bodyguard realises their feelings for each other. I felt it was suddenly forced on the readers that they have feelings for each other without showing the actual development. The pacing of the story is fast. The story gets better in the later chapters. I liked the ending very much. Everyone's ending was justified and got just the right amount of what they deserved.