From the ml pov and the dominant omega side story. Is this really the end? No side story? About the pacing and the story line is good for me, the comedy scene also make me laugh. Its a squishy fluffy story. If everything have to be taken seriously, then what's the fun of it. There are different genre and story for the one who wants the plot ‘to be taken seriously’. Sometimes people just ignore the fact that there are people who are reading for fun and to ‘escape life’ for a moment. Not everything have to be on point.
From the ml pov and the dominant omega side story. Is this really the end? No side story? About the pacing and the story line is good for me, the comedy scene also make me laugh. Its a squishy fluffy story. If everything have to be taken seriously, then what's the fun of it. There are different genre and story for the one who wants the plot ‘to be taken seriously’.
Sometimes people just ignore the fact that there are people who are reading for fun and to ‘escape life’ for a moment. Not everything have to be on point.