Which scenes is out of context? Maybe I was so enraged that I don't notice any 'no pacing or logic' things.
Well, maybe it’s less about the logic but more about the lack of connections between the events? We are presented with the info that her dad invested some money in the husband’s family, apparently his bankruptcy was somehow caused by that (how?) and FL blames the husband for the death of her father. But she believes he died of illness so why would it be their fault? Is it the classic “he fell ill of emotional distress” type of thing? And yeah, it is suggested that it was the step-mom who somehow caused his death but still, FL for years blamed his illness on husbands family somehow.
Oh and then we randomly find out that her STEP MOM tried to seduce her HUSBAND? What the hell was that about? So random.
Also we don’t even find out why they married in the first place. There is one childhood flashback but her dad was alive when they were getting married, her family was the one in power and it was the husband’s family who needed that power but they were treating her shitty even on the marriage fay? What was the power dynamic? Who is her family and who is her husband’s family?
She suddenly gets chased out the same day they inform her of the divorce, then appears in her family mansion and gets chased out by her step mom, and while she is by the river cliff considering jumping, she suddenly gets approached by her now ex husband with his new girl who are on the walk, like what? What were they doing on the walk there? In the middle of the forest, near her family house? And the girl tells her “oh if you wanna find out about your fathers death then go to the village your step mom is from. Or actually, nevermind, I’m gonna stab you now so screw that”. That stabbing scene was also so random. You get where I’m coming from? It was the first time we met the mistress character, we know nothing about her so it just seems like she’s “pure evil”, we don’t get shown any of her motivations, goals or where she’s coming from.
Then that scene with the king was also so unnatural. She woke up and went “wait, are you perhaps the king of x kindgom” “ye, that’s me, pledge your loyalty and help me with my revenge”. It’s not necessarily BAD it’s just so unnatural and rushed.
Sorry for the rant hahshsh Hope you at least enjoyed it. But yeah, I guess what I mean is that I’m more used to the authors taking their time to introduce the characters, explain the relationships, the motivations of everyone and this one felt a bit like a soap opera. Maybe the author does go into detail later on but that’s why I’m asking if it does get better or it’s just the writing style.
For her father,
Tbh she's saying that her father died of emotional distress due to her husband delayed to return his money to her father.
And only after the villain told her now she also know the step mother are to be blamed too.
The step mother tried to seduce her husband probably want to add more insult to MC.
They married because the husband pushed MC when they were young and he said he will responsible for her whole life afterward. Also, her husband intention is to get MC family's wealth to be put into his business.
What power dynamics? MC and husband family is noble in conservative country.
The author probably put alot shits in 1 day so that audiences flips the table.
Tbh, The now ex husband and villain girl probably followed her so that villain can tell everything and stab her. There is a reason why she stopped MC and stabbed her right away. Tell me if you want me to spoil em.
She knew ML because they met during her wedding day. If Im not mistaken, he did asked why shts happened. Then, he asked her if she want to do some revenge.
I agree with you that it's look so rushed tbh.
Idk if it's getting better or it's writing style but someone who read the novel verson said they stopped because they almost died due to high blood pressure. Loll
...asking cause the art is very pretty but the storyline itself is so fast-paced and messy. Like, writing-wise it reminds me of something on the level of mediocre fanfiction on wattpad, you know? The scenes seem very out of context and just randomly happening one after another, there is no pacing or logic. The motivations and thought-processes of characters are just not there, they are all very one-dimensional to the point they seem grotesque. Did the author only want to set a scene for the story in a clumsy way or is it the whole story that’s written like that?