Responses
Honestly I fault myself for expecting at least some level of Political Intrigue aand maybe some finesse in Maythan's part to survive.
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Honestly I fault myself for expecting at least some level of Political Intrigue aand maybe some finesse in Maythan's part to survive.
I was already annoyed before with my initial review but honestly now all of the characters are becoming flat as hell and the direction of the story doesn't seem to actually be cohesive and just adding random shit here and there, I was hoping actually hoping for a more interesting and rounded characters
(I know it's just basically starting but the start was more interesting to whatever tomfoolery this is) and a more cohesive arc but it's just all over the place at this point and Maythan's just acting like a fool. Maybe I'll try again in the future but this at the moment just raises my blood pressure.
I expected this to be a bit different since the first few chapters were intriguing but it just fell short.