THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL… I LIKE THE FLOW OF THE STORY, I THINK FELT THE EMOTION THAT WAS INTENDED FOR US READERS TO FEEL. I LOVE THAT. ALSO, THEIR FIRST TIME DOING IT WAS SO WHOLESOME AND CUTE. I LOVE THIS.
THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL… I LIKE THE FLOW OF THE STORY, I THINK FELT THE EMOTION THAT WAS INTENDED FOR US READERS TO FEEL. I LOVE THAT. ALSO, THEIR FIRST TIME DOING IT WAS SO WHOLESOME AND CUTE. I LOVE THIS.