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Why does this story piss me off, like its not bad but as i read it, everything abt it make...

ann4liesa January 15, 2024 7:56 am

Why does this story piss me off, like its not bad but as i read it, everything abt it makes me mad

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    Geek Goddess January 21, 2024 11:31 am

    Care to explain why it pisses you off?

    ann4liesa January 24, 2024 4:06 pm

    idk man what i wrote was question in of itself

    Geek Goddess January 24, 2024 10:25 pm
    idk man what i wrote was question in of itself ann4liesa

    Lol I'm sorry. Okay, well let's see...is it maybe because how it ended? It had like one page and told 50 years of their story in the future and then just ended.

    Or what about, it was centered around the Demon Lord, but we didn't get to see him until the end? If this was a movie, it would be 2 hours of the story, with the Demon Lord coming in the last 15 minutes and gets beat like that *snap*

    ann4liesa January 24, 2024 11:23 pm

    yeah the ending did feel a little unsatisfying. im all up for happy endings i guess i was just looking for more. thanks for trying to put it into words for me