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Lol I'm sorry. Okay, well let's see...is it maybe because how it ended? It had like one page and told 50 years of their story in the future and then just ended.
Or what about, it was centered around the Demon Lord, but we didn't get to see him until the end? If this was a movie, it would be 2 hours of the story, with the Demon Lord coming in the last 15 minutes and gets beat like that *snap*
Why does this story piss me off, like its not bad but as i read it, everything abt it makes me mad