"the seme can use sex so well, it overwhelms the uke and makes him experience sexual feelings he comes to enjoy." --> isn't that called mind-break?
oh...and I agree with you!
: ) A mind break is when they lose all intelligence and end up living only for sex. It's more a hentai thing (I think). What I mean is just temporary--like a lesser version.
I was thinking the same thing during the whole story. You can't deny that he was raped by his friend.
I like the story, but it should have rape and maybe a bullying tag so people who don't like those tropes can avoid it. This is an example of rape as ravishment, which involved seeing it as a type of erotic seduction instead of how it would be in real life. It allows a fantasy where one person can know what the other person really likes or wants even when the other doesn't know, and we may believe that the seme can use sex so well, it overwhelms the uke and makes him experience sexual feelings he comes to enjoy. In real life, that's BS, but this is a fantasy. It's rape and we should say so because people should be able to find what they like and avoid what they don't like, but the way this is used here as a story element is erotic and not realistic, and real life doesn't apply to this story.