would have been an interesting read if it had time to actually develop. (love "the truman show" theme going on here, too bad it was wasted) the pacing was way too fast not giving any time for chemistry to be built with any of the characters and a lot of plot holes too...
how did that green eye guy know there was a 5th passage that no one els knew about lol why was the "evidence" randomly on the wall, how did that guy randomly show up just in time. and organs from dead people wouldn't even be good anymore... the sequence of events was just too ridiculous and there was no build up it just all happens like a slid show lol all and all, cool story concept and i think the character design was striking, but the backgrounds/landscape was horrendous
would have been an interesting read if it had time to actually develop. (love "the truman show" theme going on here, too bad it was wasted)
the pacing was way too fast not giving any time for chemistry to be built with any of the characters and a lot of plot holes too...
how did that green eye guy know there was a 5th passage that no one els knew about lol
why was the "evidence" randomly on the wall, how did that guy randomly show up just in time.
and organs from dead people wouldn't even be good anymore...
the sequence of events was just too ridiculous and there was no build up it just all happens like a slid show lol
all and all, cool story concept and i think the character design was striking, but the backgrounds/landscape was horrendous