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Fr it would add more in the shock value and the readers won't be distracted by expecting about the shit that will be happening in the future.
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Fr it would add more in the shock value and the readers won't be distracted by expecting about the shit that will be happening in the future.
This would be a master piece if the first chapter hadn't spoiled that it's going to end horribly :')
But damn does it do it's twists and turns well!