I swear all the semes in this act like little toddlers, plot makes no sense. All their emotions are just so, just not real? Like so one dimensional. Idk if the artist is the one who wrote this, if thats true then theyd be better off hiring an author......but if there is an author maybe they should think abt how humans act, it reads like a fanfic.
Yeah it just comes off as very cringy and melodramatic considering these two just met. I would have thought this was a peak romance in middle school. I hope the artist is enjoying herself tho.
I swear all the semes in this act like little toddlers, plot makes no sense. All their emotions are just so, just not real? Like so one dimensional. Idk if the artist is the one who wrote this, if thats true then theyd be better off hiring an author......but if there is an author maybe they should think abt how humans act, it reads like a fanfic.