The world and the characters are absolutely amazing. The main characters are really beautiful beings. The idea of the avian and serpent races i so vivid and imaginative. This needs a bit better smut scenes, but other than that, it is amazing. That is a piddly little critique, but it’s the only one I have. Absolutely amazing story!
If you like this, there’s a book called Hawksong that I think this story is at least lightly if not directly inspired by/based on, it’s a straight version and the characters are definitely more flawed. The avians are the emotionless ones, it’s an interesting dynamic and story tbh
The world and the characters are absolutely amazing. The main characters are really beautiful beings. The idea of the avian and serpent races i so vivid and imaginative. This needs a bit better smut scenes, but other than that, it is amazing. That is a piddly little critique, but it’s the only one I have. Absolutely amazing story!