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This is a really amazing world

LizAhnCarmichael January 27, 2024 6:14 am

The world and the characters are absolutely amazing. The main characters are really beautiful beings. The idea of the avian and serpent races i so vivid and imaginative. This needs a bit better smut scenes, but other than that, it is amazing. That is a piddly little critique, but it’s the only one I have. Absolutely amazing story!

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    Nickname March 31, 2024 9:24 pm

    If you like this, there’s a book called Hawksong that I think this story is at least lightly if not directly inspired by/based on, it’s a straight version and the characters are definitely more flawed. The avians are the emotionless ones, it’s an interesting dynamic and story tbh

    LizAhnCarmichael April 1, 2024 3:19 am

    Thanks for the tip! I will definitely check it out! :)