This is honestly far from good. I feel like it hides it’s terrible, repetitive plot behind poetic ass words every single chapter; but they’re all filler. They keep talking, talking, talking, THAT’S ALL THEY DO, in this poetic ahh way so you’ll think "oh this is so bittersweet poor them I feel so bad [insert broken heart emoji]" It was actually interesting at first, it could’ve kept being, but it doesn’t because the author puts so much effort on the writing of those wannabe poetic monologues instead of the actual storyline in the long run. You don’t root for Yoosung at all, despite all his Shakespeare ass monologue (sorry author), because the solution to his issues is right there: MAKING A CHOICE. 1- running away for good and starting his live anew with Woojoo, 2- accepting reality isn’t so kind and accepts his grandfather’s wishes by giving his money to some dominant alpha they chose for him and done. The plot needs to stop being dragged on under the promise that "Yoosung wants his grandfather to die first", because either way he’ll run away from the house and people will try to stop him from doing so. If he’s going to run away no matter what, what exactly is the point of waiting for his grandfather to die? What is it gonna bring? How will it be of any use? As much as Yoosung’s situation isn’t easy and he’s suffering too, he’s dragging Woojoo into his suffering by making him wait for him for TEN YEARS, during all of them he knew Woojoo liked him, yet he had no issue making him watch him fuck or almost fuck other alphas and use him only whenever when he felt like it. No matter what Yoosung is going through, I’ll keep believing Woojoo deserves better, or that at least they’re not suited for each other at all. It’s not normal of Woojoo to stay in love with someone who has been treating you so badly for ten years too. It’s obsession. They need to let each other go but I bet the author is gonna brush that off with some more shakespearesque ahh monologues
This is honestly far from good.
I feel like it hides it’s terrible, repetitive plot behind poetic ass words every single chapter; but they’re all filler. They keep talking, talking, talking, THAT’S ALL THEY DO, in this poetic ahh way so you’ll think "oh this is so bittersweet poor them I feel so bad [insert broken heart emoji]"
It was actually interesting at first, it could’ve kept being, but it doesn’t because the author puts so much effort on the writing of those wannabe poetic monologues instead of the actual storyline in the long run.
You don’t root for Yoosung at all, despite all his Shakespeare ass monologue (sorry author), because the solution to his issues is right there: MAKING A CHOICE.
1- running away for good and starting his live anew with Woojoo,
2- accepting reality isn’t so kind and accepts his grandfather’s wishes by giving his money to some dominant alpha they chose for him and done.
The plot needs to stop being dragged on under the promise that "Yoosung wants his grandfather to die first", because either way he’ll run away from the house and people will try to stop him from doing so. If he’s going to run away no matter what, what exactly is the point of waiting for his grandfather to die? What is it gonna bring? How will it be of any use?
As much as Yoosung’s situation isn’t easy and he’s suffering too, he’s dragging Woojoo into his suffering by making him wait for him for TEN YEARS, during all of them he knew Woojoo liked him, yet he had no issue making him watch him fuck or almost fuck other alphas and use him only whenever when he felt like it.
No matter what Yoosung is going through, I’ll keep believing Woojoo deserves better, or that at least they’re not suited for each other at all. It’s not normal of Woojoo to stay in love with someone who has been treating you so badly for ten years too. It’s obsession. They need to let each other go but I bet the author is gonna brush that off with some more shakespearesque ahh monologues