the way the gangster "talks" sounds like a description of a child. you know, like stereotypical gangster. Its not bad but its also not good, but its so funny lmao. the artstyle was so good, i just can't take the words that come out of their mouth lmaoaoaoao its so unserious. but all in all, its good, the alpha is nice and is taking care of the omege really well, but the writer of the story prolly needs a better editor because the dialogue ain't it lmaoaoaooao
the way the gangster "talks" sounds like a description of a child. you know, like stereotypical gangster. Its not bad but its also not good, but its so funny lmao. the artstyle was so good, i just can't take the words that come out of their mouth lmaoaoaoao its so unserious. but all in all, its good, the alpha is nice and is taking care of the omege really well, but the writer of the story prolly needs a better editor because the dialogue ain't it lmaoaoaooao