Something that‘s been bothering me is, that I have barely any idea what exactly the ML is thinking and how his character is shaped.
I forgot all their names by now, so I‘ll adress them by MC (redhead) and ML (his love interest/bf)
The artstyle is pretty and the story has a lot of potential, but you can tell that the characters don‘t have (so far) that much of a formed personality. The ML still feels like a stranger to me and it feels like as if the MC has no idea what his bf is like. We‘re already 55 chapters in.
It‘s driving me nuts, that the story itself has barely and flesh to the bone; it‘s not as juicy. It feels like as if its not that throughoutly thought of.
I have nothing against super calm and collected characters, but the ML feels TOO dry, to the point where I‘m wondering what the MC actually sees in him.
The author should invest into more conversations. Be it during sex, normal daily activities, etc. It all seems a tad too awkward tbh.
I‘ve read „Safety First“ too and (if I remember it correctly) the characters seemed more familiar while the story developed.
I‘m not sure how many chapters this story will have, but I‘m praying that it won’t go on like this. It‘s be a shame tbh.
Now don‘t come at me with „why are you reading it“: I‘m just dropping off some thoughts I‘ve been carrying along while reading the story.
Something that‘s been bothering me is, that I have barely any idea what exactly the ML is thinking and how his character is shaped.
I forgot all their names by now, so I‘ll adress them by MC (redhead) and ML (his love interest/bf)
The artstyle is pretty and the story has a lot of potential, but you can tell that the characters don‘t have (so far) that much of a formed personality. The ML still feels like a stranger to me and it feels like as if the MC has no idea what his bf is like. We‘re already 55 chapters in.
It‘s driving me nuts, that the story itself has barely and flesh to the bone; it‘s not as juicy. It feels like as if its not that throughoutly thought of.
I have nothing against super calm and collected characters, but the ML feels TOO dry, to the point where I‘m wondering what the MC actually sees in him.
The author should invest into more conversations. Be it during sex, normal daily activities, etc. It all seems a tad too awkward tbh.
I‘ve read „Safety First“ too and (if I remember it correctly) the characters seemed more familiar while the story developed.
I‘m not sure how many chapters this story will have, but I‘m praying that it won’t go on like this. It‘s be a shame tbh.
Now don‘t come at me with „why are you reading it“: I‘m just dropping off some thoughts I‘ve been carrying along while reading the story.