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Expected but bad writing

Ramora February 16, 2024 4:46 am

The author was always going to have them as end game, I saw it from the beginning. But the time skip was lazy. I understand if you want to fast-forward to a healthier and more mature character, but if you don't show us their progress between time skips, then suddenly hooking up will look cheap. I like the main couple but it was planned horribly. I could've written a better ending drunk.

Responses
    Suki February 16, 2024 6:20 am

    So write it duhh ✍

    Ramora February 16, 2024 7:31 am
    So write it duhh ✍ Suki

    I wouldn't waste my time writing it like I did reading it in the first place. If you can't take criticism on a piece of work and your only rebuttal is, "write it" or "make your own" then you are basically telling me you can't defend shitting writing aka this manga.

    slut February 16, 2024 7:23 pm

    shhhhh they cant handle the truth lol
    this haf tbe potential to make yahwi and jooins relationship good, maybe we didnt even need a time skip this big lol. they just chose to do it the easy way, i suppose even the authors were just hurrying to wrap ts up already lol.

    Ichihime February 16, 2024 7:31 pm
    shhhhh they cant handle the truth lol this haf tbe potential to make yahwi and jooins relationship good, maybe we didnt even need a time skip this big lol. they just chose to do it the easy way, i suppose even ... slut

    Sex is also a love language. Them fucking after their reunion doesn't invalidate their love. They can multitask too, they can fuck and still communicate it's not impossible. Not everything has to be textbook

    slut February 16, 2024 7:34 pm
    Sex is also a love language. Them fucking after their reunion doesn't invalidate their love. They can multitask too, they can fuck and still communicate it's not impossible. Not everything has to be textbook Ichihime

    whatever you say queen