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DerpyInu97 February 16, 2024 8:09 pm

Read the whole thing in one sitting and I dunno why this wasn't that satisfying to me. Don't get me wrong, this was an amazing manwha otherwise I wouldn't have stayed up all night until the morning reading this (≧▽≦)

But yeah, 8/10 would definitely read it again multiple times.(づ ̄ ³ ̄)づ

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    Slaytheday February 16, 2024 9:12 pm

    I guess the conclusion with Rigon's father wasn't done that well. Could be that. There wasn't any of the verbal beatdown we usually see with these kinds of stories. Just him getting rid of his dad just like that. Also, the whole build-up was too excessive for actual thing. Felt more like the conclusion of a side plot. Maybe this is just me, but the reveal of Haon's father was also underwhelming? It was too many plot twists and turns, which ended up decreasing the overall satisfaction of reading the story

    DerpyInu97 February 17, 2024 4:45 pm
    I guess the conclusion with Rigon's father wasn't done that well. Could be that. There wasn't any of the verbal beatdown we usually see with these kinds of stories. Just him getting rid of his dad just like tha... Slaytheday

    Yeah, you're right. I also think the conclusion was too rushed. I was totally expecting some kind of battle or something but all we got was a weird trial where everyone conveniently found the evidences and witnesses and connected the dots then BOOM! He's guilty That kind of build up for nothing.

    I'm also kind of annoyed that Haon was mentally fine after those 10 years inside that hole. He has to be a little bit crazy in the head with no one to talk to. Getting distracted with "training" isn't enough to justify to me for him to be fine after those 10 years of isolation ┑( ̄Д  ̄)┍

    Lastly, the names are so corny too...like the hell is the "Blue Flame of Retribution" and "Red Eyed Demon" ╥﹏╥

    Anyway, I think these were the minor things that made it 8/10 to me.