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Good Concept...Poor Execution

PmChivas February 16, 2024 10:18 pm

The idea behind the plot is great and original. But the flow and execution of the plot idea is done poorly. And why is the FL always being saved?! She had such guts in the beginning, but turned into another typical damsel-in-distress. For someone who does kendo for a hobby/exercise she sure didn't think about using any of her points to increase her stamina. I was really hoping, by the thumbnail, that FL would run-a-way and come back as an assassin or something similar. Well, she escaped, but that's about it. Potential wasted. (︶︿︶)

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