A bit cringey at times but meh I read far stinky stories before. This one ain't bad.
The incestuous relationship (wc is a bait fyi) is a bit uncomfortable to read at first but later on, it's manageable. My years of experience in disassociating myself when I read def helps me a lot to cope faster w the plot.
Honestly, I like how the author decided to go for the (semi) reverse harem route. Did not expect that sp bcos readers nowadays are allergic to harem lol
But! I kinda wish they push the 'reverse harem' to its limit. Like, why use the multiple timeline bs? Just go all out in one timeline like a champ! Come on. You already wrote such crazy plot, whats stopping you to COMMIT to it?? Don't use shtty excuses to why theyre fcking eo. Give me pure insanity! Give me the spice! Give me the drama! Don't use the 'alternative universe' excuse to make your already fcked up plotlines less... Uh, Fcked. Don't give me the 'they MUST do it bcos fl might yadayadablahblah' bs embrace the chaos you started damn it!
A bit cringey at times but meh I read far stinky stories before. This one ain't bad.
The incestuous relationship (wc is a bait fyi) is a bit uncomfortable to read at first but later on, it's manageable. My years of experience in disassociating myself when I read def helps me a lot to cope faster w the plot.
Honestly, I like how the author decided to go for the (semi) reverse harem route. Did not expect that sp bcos readers nowadays are allergic to harem lol
But! I kinda wish they push the 'reverse harem' to its limit. Like, why use the multiple timeline bs? Just go all out in one timeline like a champ! Come on. You already wrote such crazy plot, whats stopping you to COMMIT to it?? Don't use shtty excuses to why theyre fcking eo. Give me pure insanity! Give me the spice! Give me the drama! Don't use the 'alternative universe' excuse to make your already fcked up plotlines less... Uh, Fcked. Don't give me the 'they MUST do it bcos fl might yadayadablahblah' bs embrace the chaos you started damn it!