Plot: 7/10 Artstyle: 7/10 (sometimes inconsistent) Characters: 7/10 MC(Rosalyn): 8.5/10 Original ML: 2/10 ML development: 9/10 Side characters: 7/10 2nd ML priest guy: 5/10 (forgettable) 2nd ML development: 4/10 (barely any screentime, had some lore relevance) 3rd ML: 10/10 (looked hot) 3rd ML: 5/10 (had some lore relevance, pretty important character) Antagonists(queen and ella?): 6/10 (didn't necessarily posted a threat, they felt weak/not scary) ML Sibling: 8/10 (cute :3) Pacing: 6/10 Suspense:5/10 (It lacked conflict/drama imo) Overall: 6/10 Decent
Final thoughts: hot take btw Really strong start, with the plot, setting, theme and all, it was good in the beginning but i wished that elle/ella(i honestly forgot her name) was more annoying/relevant to the story, but she barely made any problems for the mc, same with the queen, what they did, did not feel like problems. it also slowly got boring in the part where the ML realizes his feelings for Fl, and Rosalyn being dense/hard to get wasn't my cup of tea cuz it felt like stalling. honest thoughts it that it felt like everything is just going in rosalyn's favor, like *poof* problem *poof* here's the solution(I honestly expected an arc where rosalyn had to slowly regain the ML's love after the love bomb thingy).Rosalyn didn't suffer as much as I expected with the "this tyrant ML is so mean and bad and he will kill you for breathing", like I expected her getting imprisoned and stuff and like somewhat rebelling to the ml, but it was still ok for me, maybe I just read too much fucked up shit, but I would def recommend this to people who are new to historical manwhas, it just lacks the thrill, the rising action and climax felt rushed, idk.
Plot: 7/10
Artstyle: 7/10 (sometimes inconsistent)
Characters: 7/10
MC(Rosalyn): 8.5/10
Original ML: 2/10
ML development: 9/10
Side characters: 7/10
2nd ML priest guy: 5/10 (forgettable)
2nd ML development: 4/10 (barely any screentime, had some lore relevance)
3rd ML: 10/10 (looked hot)
3rd ML: 5/10 (had some lore relevance, pretty important character)
Antagonists(queen and ella?): 6/10 (didn't necessarily posted a threat, they felt weak/not scary)
ML Sibling: 8/10 (cute :3)
Pacing: 6/10
Suspense:5/10 (It lacked conflict/drama imo)
Overall: 6/10 Decent
Final thoughts: hot take btw
Really strong start, with the plot, setting, theme and all, it was good in the beginning but i wished that elle/ella(i honestly forgot her name) was more annoying/relevant to the story, but she barely made any problems for the mc, same with the queen, what they did, did not feel like problems. it also slowly got boring in the part where the ML realizes his feelings for Fl, and Rosalyn being dense/hard to get wasn't my cup of tea cuz it felt like stalling. honest thoughts it that it felt like everything is just going in rosalyn's favor, like *poof* problem *poof* here's the solution(I honestly expected an arc where rosalyn had to slowly regain the ML's love after the love bomb thingy).Rosalyn didn't suffer as much as I expected with the "this tyrant ML is so mean and bad and he will kill you for breathing", like I expected her getting imprisoned and stuff and like somewhat rebelling to the ml, but it was still ok for me, maybe I just read too much fucked up shit, but I would def recommend this to people who are new to historical manwhas, it just lacks the thrill, the rising action and climax felt rushed, idk.