I wondered why the story was so jumbled and the pacing was off, but it's a two-shot. It had potential, but the story is too squished, I kept thinking I'd missed something. I've read oneshots that delivered a more coherent story.
I wondered why the story was so jumbled and the pacing was off, but it's a two-shot. It had potential, but the story is too squished, I kept thinking I'd missed something. I've read oneshots that delivered a more coherent story.