It's decent in terms of the outcome.... but the execution of it all is really sloppy.
It feels rushed and like she simply stumbled into it. If it was that easy to get rid of him, then why did it take soooo darn long? She didn't succeed through a smart plan: things went wrong yet magically fell into place. Feels really hollow to me.
I get that this was a smut first and plot comes second, if that, kind of story but... building so much dislike around a character for such an u rewarding send off is pretty disappointing. Feels like the author got tired and decided to wrap things up as quick as possible.
It's decent in terms of the outcome.... but the execution of it all is really sloppy.
It feels rushed and like she simply stumbled into it. If it was that easy to get rid of him, then why did it take soooo darn long? She didn't succeed through a smart plan: things went wrong yet magically fell into place. Feels really hollow to me.
I get that this was a smut first and plot comes second, if that, kind of story but... building so much dislike around a character for such an u rewarding send off is pretty disappointing. Feels like the author got tired and decided to wrap things up as quick as possible.