Sort of a rough start. I really didn't like how they opened the chapter with the "twist" since it really didn't change much. Also, the narration in this is kind of more tell than it needs to be. However, the plot's premise is really interesting and ice-age apocalypse thing is rarely done before.
Also, also if my boyfriend gave me snickers bar, I too would betray his ass. Idc if it's the end of the world.
Sort of a rough start. I really didn't like how they opened the chapter with the "twist" since it really didn't change much. Also, the narration in this is kind of more tell than it needs to be. However, the plot's premise is really interesting and ice-age apocalypse thing is rarely done before.
Also, also if my boyfriend gave me snickers bar, I too would betray his ass. Idc if it's the end of the world.