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Welp, it happened

GeeGee February 26, 2024 9:40 pm

The story was going so well, and their chemistry was so good. I was expecting to see more of them interacting.. Then we were hit with a smut scene.

It felt rushed, and I can tell that this scene is simply to push the angst. It's a bit disappointing. There was no reason to make the seme the "bad guy", this could've been a really cute story.

The overly sized peener, the no lube + protection, and the bad dirty talk made it even worse. If the sex was better written, then it might've been excusable, but not in this case.

I had so much hope in the first few chapters. The comedy was smooth and the chemistry was good. Now it feels like the plot has done a complete flip.

I know author writes amazing stories, so I'm willing to see this till the end. And while this is a story filled with clichés, I was hoping that we'd at least be spared from the naive uke x exploitative seme.. Nevertheless, I excited to see what comes next!

Responses
    _LUXIN_ February 26, 2024 10:38 pm

    The seme was always the bad guy ! He made his intentions clear from the get go, one good fuck and that’s all!