Responses
I like the core plot tbh: Poor commoner needs to work for the mafia to earn money and gets entangled with the boss in a bonking-type way.
I like those plots but this one really got half-assed. The author should have taken lots of time writing this, it could have been impressive if done right.
The only thing that has potential is the art. The storyline was so bad I literally had to stop for a few moments to process what tf was going on