Alright... Controversial take, but I'd actually prefer this so much more if it wasn't a yaoi.
The sex lacked chemistry, and it was the same rewashed dialogue from 3 000 different yaois. Reading define the relationship has really put into perspective what a constructive sex scene is, one that actually pushes the plot forward.
This however, we're still on the 10th chapter, so there really isn't a plot to push. I felt myself actually take a breath after I realised the sex was over. It's so much more interesting seeing mc navigate through his life, and interact with the ml as they figure themselves out.
Their relationship dynamic has so much potential, and they're going to be a cute couple. I just wish the r rated content will be kept to a minimum, because it really serves to narrative purpose currently
Alright... Controversial take, but I'd actually prefer this so much more if it wasn't a yaoi.
The sex lacked chemistry, and it was the same rewashed dialogue from 3 000 different yaois. Reading define the relationship has really put into perspective what a constructive sex scene is, one that actually pushes the plot forward.
This however, we're still on the 10th chapter, so there really isn't a plot to push.
I felt myself actually take a breath after I realised the sex was over. It's so much more interesting seeing mc navigate through his life, and interact with the ml as they figure themselves out.
Their relationship dynamic has so much potential, and they're going to be a cute couple. I just wish the r rated content will be kept to a minimum, because it really serves to narrative purpose currently