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P.s. I get coming into work early to avoid rush hour traffic (I do the same for uni, you not catching me standing in a bitch I paid for) but... surely you have other hobbies? On the other hand, she's wildly competent and also wildly repressed and also wildly overworked, so I guess this is how she vents it out.
I think it's well written. Characterisation stays constant, there's foreshadowing, some stakes and so on. Authors can be quite lenient on their characters but you can really see that this isn't the case here ☠ The best stories are when characters are autonomous beings and not self-inserts, I honestly was concerned this was going to be self-indulgent with little interest in examining and challenging their characters in the narrative, but it's actually a crap ton more humorous than expected, though the title should've been an indicator.
I know a lot of us are raising eyebrows that an erotica connoisseur would be straight ass at being erotic but hey, that's her battle. Prayers for the ML, anytime she said something crazy I sighed with him. Ma'am... I fear you might just be a porn addict. Please get a man in you sooner, you're embarrassing the hoes.