I really like this story so far but I really don’t like the sister. I think the main issue I see is that she still sees this as a game and game characters while the MC already sees this world as a world that just similar to the game. By this point it’s just gonna suck be it they stay or leave. If they leave all the characters are going to be devastated not only the MLs while if they stay he going to have to confront never going back home.
I really do like the more down to earth writing like yeah there some out there parts but overall he’s tried to take things in stride and make decisions that both help his character and his cousin.
I really like this story so far but I really don’t like the sister. I think the main issue I see is that she still sees this as a game and game characters while the MC already sees this world as a world that just similar to the game. By this point it’s just gonna suck be it they stay or leave. If they leave all the characters are going to be devastated not only the MLs while if they stay he going to have to confront never going back home.
I really do like the more down to earth writing like yeah there some out there parts but overall he’s tried to take things in stride and make decisions that both help his character and his cousin.
I honestly can’t wait to see what happens.