I read this because i saw lots of comments calling it 'Underrated Masterpiece' and honestly it is Underrated. It is fucking good and deserve more attention. The way it ended, with bit reveal about ML story........ is just Chief kiss. It got me emotion, how they effected each other life and things that kind of didn't made sense in early chapters, made sense now (like ML caring for MC in early chapters and why he fell for him). Their relationship toh....... 2 tsundere in relationship with no proper communication is dangerous and one of them being Childish AF make it worst. I love the progress and development they made in their relationship and honestly hoping they both would Communicate properly if any problem occurs in future.
NOW, Though i love the story, I can't really call it a Masterpiece as i find it bit lacking here and there, though it has potential to be one but then again it doesn't dive in deep, making story light hearted and sometime bit casual. I also felt some part and panel was not executed smoothly (personal Opinion, i see this cases often in manhua compare to manga and mamhwa). I also didn't like how some things were left in vague, with no proper conclusion.
I know i am diving in too deep but i would have love to see these~ 1. MC talking with his mom. The reason why MC was hidding about writing stories and didn't gave his best was because of his Mom. Although with the help of ML, MC found courage to pursue what he like but what If..... What IF one day MC mom find out about this. What IF what happened before repeat again? Whay will MC do then? For once i need this god damn drama to Happen. I wish author had dive deep into this, to give more depth to the story. MC has very good relationship with his mother except his mother is against him being writer. Even if not now in future there might come a day when MC mom will find out about this, Given MC nature and his relationship with his mother, his mother reaction would definitely affect him. What will he do if his mother is still against it and their relationship worsen. I would love to see MC talk to his mother and deal with her so that no problem arises in future. Be it convincing or persuade her or whatever, Its not like MC can cut off his relationship with her, afterall his mother only has him now or maybe he will, afterall we didn't saw her ever again toh after that one time (IDK). It would be so nice to see MC overcome the problem that was the start of this story and receiving his mother support for the things he love to do.
2. The Brothers Story~ I don't like when author give us depth on Characters story only to leave us half way and give Vague Conclusion. This exactly what happened in here..... MC friend and his brother story. I want more of their story. Is author planning to make them side CP or just let their relationship be like how it is (not really my main concern). In the extra we saw them again, behaving same and seriously i want to know if their relationship improved. Whether they were able to deal with their father? Of yes, then how? It doesn't look like any of the brother has power to stop or escape or deal with their father. And If they didn't get rid of their father then Did the older brother got married?because his Marriage was coming within a year, while the extra story is 2 year after. And If the elder one didn't got married then wouldn't the father come gain to deal with him and the younger one. and If he did get married for his brother sake...... ughhh i don't want to think anymore. I wish author have given us a proper conclusion for them. I want a separate story of them now and i want both of them happy.
I read this because i saw lots of comments calling it 'Underrated Masterpiece' and honestly it is Underrated. It is fucking good and deserve more attention. The way it ended, with bit reveal about ML story........ is just Chief kiss. It got me emotion, how they effected each other life and things that kind of didn't made sense in early chapters, made sense now (like ML caring for MC in early chapters and why he fell for him).
Their relationship toh....... 2 tsundere in relationship with no proper communication is dangerous and one of them being Childish AF make it worst. I love the progress and development they made in their relationship and honestly hoping they both would Communicate properly if any problem occurs in future.
NOW, Though i love the story, I can't really call it a Masterpiece as i find it bit lacking here and there, though it has potential to be one but then again it doesn't dive in deep, making story light hearted and sometime bit casual. I also felt some part and panel was not executed smoothly (personal Opinion, i see this cases often in manhua compare to manga and mamhwa). I also didn't like how some things were left in vague, with no proper conclusion.
I know i am diving in too deep but i would have love to see these~
1. MC talking with his mom.
The reason why MC was hidding about writing stories and didn't gave his best was because of his Mom. Although with the help of ML, MC found courage to pursue what he like but what If..... What IF one day MC mom find out about this. What IF what happened before repeat again? Whay will MC do then? For once i need this god damn drama to Happen.
I wish author had dive deep into this, to give more depth to the story. MC has very good relationship with his mother except his mother is against him being writer. Even if not now in future there might come a day when MC mom will find out about this, Given MC nature and his relationship with his mother, his mother reaction would definitely affect him. What will he do if his mother is still against it and their relationship worsen.
I would love to see MC talk to his mother and deal with her so that no problem arises in future. Be it convincing or persuade her or whatever, Its not like MC can cut off his relationship with her, afterall his mother only has him now or maybe he will, afterall we didn't saw her ever again toh after that one time (IDK). It would be so nice to see MC overcome the problem that was the start of this story and receiving his mother support for the things he love to do.
2. The Brothers Story~
I don't like when author give us depth on Characters story only to leave us half way and give Vague Conclusion. This exactly what happened in here..... MC friend and his brother story. I want more of their story. Is author planning to make them side CP or just let their relationship be like how it is (not really my main concern).
In the extra we saw them again, behaving same and seriously i want to know if their relationship improved. Whether they were able to deal with their father? Of yes, then how? It doesn't look like any of the brother has power to stop or escape or deal with their father. And If they didn't get rid of their father then Did the older brother got married?because his Marriage was coming within a year, while the extra story is 2 year after. And If the elder one didn't got married then wouldn't the father come gain to deal with him and the younger one. and If he did get married for his brother sake...... ughhh i don't want to think anymore. I wish author have given us a proper conclusion for them. I want a separate story of them now and i want both of them happy.