First off I wanna say I like the story and it had great potential. The art is really good and it has a great plot. HOWEVER, the story was wayyyy to short and it feels unfinished. We dont get any closure with the MC and his asshole father. We also dont get to see the evil sunbae's life fall to pieces from what he did. Another thing I dont like, is how the MC dosent have a freaking back bone lol. He just allows a stranger to come and "protect" him because his father says so. And the ML is just a complete asshole who just pushes him around and plays dumb ass mind games all the time. Not to mention the ML is a gangster who works directly under the MC's father, who the MC has been trying not to associate himself with for his entire life.... It rly dosent make that much sense lol. Dont even get me started on the bum ass side story. Like i get the're not gonna be lovey dovey but, I feel like that scene would have been recieved better if it wasent their first time together, or you know, if the ML wasent being all rapey
*long rant incoming lol*
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First off I wanna say I like the story and it had great potential. The art is really good and it has a great plot. HOWEVER, the story was wayyyy to short and it feels unfinished. We dont get any closure with the MC and his asshole father. We also dont get to see the evil sunbae's life fall to pieces from what he did. Another thing I dont like, is how the MC dosent have a freaking back bone lol. He just allows a stranger to come and "protect" him because his father says so. And the ML is just a complete asshole who just pushes him around and plays dumb ass mind games all the time. Not to mention the ML is a gangster who works directly under the MC's father, who the MC has been trying not to associate himself with for his entire life.... It rly dosent make that much sense lol. Dont even get me started on the bum ass side story. Like i get the're not gonna be lovey dovey but, I feel like that scene would have been recieved better if it wasent their first time together, or you know, if the ML wasent being all rapey