After reading the summary, I thought,"is she a kid?" Who in this modern world dreams of falling in love with a prince?! I guess this would be more interesting if... Going back to the olden times, she was a commoner who dreams of marrying a prince. She works as a vendor (maid is overused but good too, and then turns out one of the people she kept ridiculing was a prince, and then she didn't know how to act, so since she's pretty dead, she'll just flatter him and then try go sneak out or earn his forgiveness, but the prince is disgusted with her and so she gets thrown out and then she makes her living as a person who dislikes the prince...then after some years she encounters the neighboring country's prince and... Oh, I'll just write that down. Now I've thought of a story for myself.) who finds a secret passage that leads to one of the greatest secrets of all 3princes and the like... But this is their plot, not mine... Just making suggestions. I dream alot, though not creatively.
After reading the summary, I thought,"is she a kid?" Who in this modern world dreams of falling in love with a prince?! I guess this would be more interesting if...
Going back to the olden times, she was a commoner who dreams of marrying a prince.
She works as a vendor (maid is overused but good too, and then turns out one of the people she kept ridiculing was a prince, and then she didn't know how to act, so since she's pretty dead, she'll just flatter him and then try go sneak out or earn his forgiveness, but the prince is disgusted with her and so she gets thrown out and then she makes her living as a person who dislikes the prince...then after some years she encounters the neighboring country's prince and... Oh, I'll just write that down. Now I've thought of a story for myself.) who finds a secret passage that leads to one of the greatest secrets of all 3princes and the like...
But this is their plot, not mine... Just making suggestions.
I dream alot, though not creatively.