i dont know, i feel like this is not the way to write a slow burn story. i think the main point is the length of the chapters and i feel like nothing is happening. i dont think its a good way to build a story up if this is what the author is doing rn. yeah this is going to be the knot of the story if jk lose the match but with these short chapters ofc people gonna lose their interest, its expectable. in every chapter we only see dan being harrased, humiliated, then he cries, jk is same in every ch. yeah theres a plot i see but this is not the best way to write it i think. when the protagonist is not relatable and acts dumb in a obvious way, its not readable anymore.
i dont know, i feel like this is not the way to write a slow burn story. i think the main point is the length of the chapters and i feel like nothing is happening. i dont think its a good way to build a story up if this is what the author is doing rn. yeah this is going to be the knot of the story if jk lose the match but with these short chapters ofc people gonna lose their interest, its expectable. in every chapter we only see dan being harrased, humiliated, then he cries, jk is same in every ch. yeah theres a plot i see but this is not the best way to write it i think. when the protagonist is not relatable and acts dumb in a obvious way, its not readable anymore.