It’s a bad writing. Very amateurish, as if written by a kid. Honestly, I’ve read better amateur watt pad stories than this lol. Poor characterization. Uke’s character was so inconsistent and ridiculous. Only a lil likable in 1st season then I started to dislike dum uke. That immature blondie was unnecessary character too. Author created problems for the sake of creating problems. Story was bland, as a reader I didn’t feel anything. I liked Yahwi, if only author knew how to create and play with complicated characters.
Creative writing, characterization and plot execution isn’t everyone’s fort.
It’s a bad writing. Very amateurish, as if written by a kid. Honestly, I’ve read better amateur watt pad stories than this lol. Poor characterization. Uke’s character was so inconsistent and ridiculous. Only a lil likable in 1st season then I started to dislike dum uke. That immature blondie was unnecessary character too. Author created problems for the sake of creating problems. Story was bland, as a reader I didn’t feel anything. I liked Yahwi, if only author knew how to create and play with complicated characters.
Creative writing, characterization and plot execution isn’t everyone’s fort.