its a oneshot dj bro you dont have to act like a critic… and i dont get what you mean by fumble their char dynamic cus what r u expecting with pet play smut??? do you expect neuvillette to start busting out judicial terms during sex or something
no i don't expect neuvi to talk about his job during sex. i'm just saying that this is low tier smut that doesn't do the characters any justice. pet play CAN be done well, while keeping the characters intact. this one does not. be normal about people who don't share your opinion, would you. way too defensive and of what?
Author did say that the characters are ooc. But I agree with you a bit
cringe dialogue, mischaracterization... i don't know what i expected honestly. product of "tall male model yaoi of the patch" brainrot.
neuviwrio pet play could've been so good but ppl fumble their character dynamic all the time by fitting them into typical yaoi boxes. disappointed but not surprised.
atp just create original smut bro they would not fucking say that (/sp meme ref)