the story was cute, but the characters and outfits were kinda cringey.
What’s with all the patterns? I don’t think I’ve ever seen someone wear a cheetah print turtle neck before. Who goes to sleep in a crop top? why does mc have a shirt that looks like the floors at pump it up? You could have googled outfit ideas or just put them in a few repetitive outfits and it would be fine.
Although , the senpai’s story and personality was interesting, she gives me major “I’m not like other girl” or edgy middle schooler vibes. I’d cringe so hard if someone told me “ do you like the me you see now or the real me.”
Other than those two things this story was very cute and wholesome. Also the food looked good.
the story was cute, but the characters and outfits were kinda cringey.
What’s with all the patterns? I don’t think I’ve ever seen someone wear a cheetah print turtle neck before. Who goes to sleep in a crop top? why does mc have a shirt that looks like the floors at pump it up? You could have googled outfit ideas or just put them in a few repetitive outfits and it would be fine.
Although , the senpai’s story and personality was interesting, she gives me major “I’m not like other girl” or edgy middle schooler vibes. I’d cringe so hard if someone told me “ do you like the me you see now or the real me.”
Other than those two things this story was very cute and wholesome. Also the food looked good.