I loved reading this thanks ur so real
lolllll thank u i get way too invested w analysis' for porn
NYAHHAHA WHEN U WORD IT LIKE THAT.....lmaoo keep it up ur doin' great dear stranger continue to heed ur realest statements~
Lol. I was too but the plot has unraveled quite a bit.
I mean he's depicted as this cold and distant person. But also very controlling. I think you meant presence (for the kid). But it needs something more than just filler porn with a side of ..
Nothing is explained well. Or discovered well
There are just too many strings left untied and unresolved here. Like a 3-D puzzle that is a translucent blue with nothing inside. That's how I feel about this story.
i think no matter what direction this manga takes, i cant find myself enjoying it.
the plot is basically, alpha befriends beta (believed to be in the beginning by both sides, which i dont get this trope in omegaverse plots, in order to get pregnant the man would need eggs and a utuerus... or did those spontaneously form when he presented?) soon their relationship grows into an intimate one, alpha appreciates the distance and the beta respects it but it turns out that the beta had expected more while the alpha didnt. this causes their separation. then, a huge domino effect happens where the beta greets the alpha in a rut which triggers his heat and his omega side is awakened, the two mate and bond from their instincts, which wasnt consent on either of their sides, and also impregnates the omega.
the plot there in itself ig isnt too bad, but everything after? i dont know, i feel like the alpha couldve been written in two ways, 1) engraged from being bonded and mated subconsciously and without explicit consent (because he was in rut), and his mate leaving him which caused him to go thru his regular ruts alone (which is generally painful in omegaverse plots, for a an alpha/omega to go thru a cycle without their mate) which i thought this plot was originally going to go with during the omega alphas meeting on the bench during the sunset, with how the alpha described his memories of that day. but as the story continues, turns out the alpha doesnt feel this way at all, he isnt trying to make the omegas life worse as a getback, which causes more need for clarification, how come the alpha didnt end up hating the omega, especially since he had kept his distance with him in the past?
that leads to 2) the alpha has always loved/learned to love the omega. which... also doesnt add up. you could either say that he kept his distance in the past because he was afraid of the intimacy or whatever, or you could say that spending his ruts without his mate made him obsessive with reuniting with the omega (which the omega wouldnt reciprocate since hes recessive) which does seem closer to the plot considering the alphas jealous, possessive, and almost nurturing nature, but then, why is he so goddamn forceful? the sex scenes here are just rape, it doesnt matter if the omega gets wet when aroused, if hes continously saying "stop, no, wait" and you continue, its rape. the alpha isnt even in a genuine rut cycle, this is just how hes acting. and also the way that the alphas so controlling of the omega, especially with his job, phone, house? i get hes the heir to a massive corporation and has many responsibility and doesnt have the greatest family, yada yada, hell maybe he did go crazy from spending five years estranged from his mate (which the story doesnt even explicitly say) but every issue with him would be solved if... he was just nice to the omega. tried to understand his fear for just five seconds and realize that manipulation isnt going to work. this had potential if only the author wasnt so fixated with omegaverse rape porn, hell i love omegaverse porn, but rape is just disgusting
this is a much smaller issue but another thing i have a problem with is the kid! idk maybe im biased cause ive read a lot of mpreg/single dad mangas but the kid... feels like a cat at this point. hes not even a little worried that theyre suddenly moving? that his hyung is just a random guy? not picking up at how his dads being mistreated? really? i feel like especially with him having the pheromone syndrome and being a hyper dominant alpha, shouldnt he feel a little bit protective over his dad? hes hardly ever present and when he is he says and does nothing, which cant even be excused of "oh hes sick so he doesnt act like a kid" no hes just never prominent (i dont know if thats the right word but hopefully my point gets across)
i dont know i just felt like ranting before i went to sleep i wish this story had a lot more care put into it cause the art is actually gorgeous (i do wish that the faces had a bit more emotion to them tho)