i lowk already knew it would turn out bad based off the first chapter’s beginning, but like it’s BAD.
yeah but at least it's entertaining dumpster fire
Why do u think it isn’t well-written. I think is great
i read a whole lot of other stuff so my standards are a bit too high. i think the story's entertaining, the dynamics interesting enough i wish it was explored more in stories, but i think only until i read the end could i be able to ascertain if it's actually a well-written piece, and not just bc it's a realistic fucked up story.
damn im just reading this for smut and whatever toxic power dynamics and ngl it's entertaining seeing yall lose your minds. i mean, if the uke cheats, while disappointing, it's not all that surprising and kinda in-character. it's already established early on that it's incredibly toxic, and thru out the story there's this developing theme of mind vs body, or love vs lust, and the sexual exploitation of a younger person and its effects. I'm more uncomfortable with the latter, and the excess of graphic violent sex that comprised 50% of the story thus far... but well, it's not like I came here expecting a wholesome relationship. however, that's not to say it's well-written... just, not unexpected and out-of-tune if he lets himself get fucked by the glasses dude