Doesn't she get tired of getting more lovers?? I feel like giving equal attention to tree and getting to know those better to strenghten the relationships is already consuming. Even the guys are telling her to ,ot have too much on her mind, and not get exhausted. I don’t think she is head over heels with the newer guys, and though I get she bonded with syd, establishing her life in this world could already be more of a priority, than speedrunning "the 100 girlfriends that really, really love you". I like these moments when she's honest with her lovers and her facade cracks down, and they change each other for the better. As a reader, I think seeing character we already know get more developed is more satisfying than jumping to new routes right as another one reaches resolution. Also, the worldbuilding is going so slow... I can tell that there's something going on beneath the surface, but it's so disperse. I really like this story and will continue reading, this is only a collection of my thoughts.
Doesn't she get tired of getting more lovers?? I feel like giving equal attention to tree and getting to know those better to strenghten the relationships is already consuming. Even the guys are telling her to ,ot have too much on her mind, and not get exhausted. I don’t think she is head over heels with the newer guys, and though I get she bonded with syd, establishing her life in this world could already be more of a priority, than speedrunning "the 100 girlfriends that really, really love you". I like these moments when she's honest with her lovers and her facade cracks down, and they change each other for the better. As a reader, I think seeing character we already know get more developed is more satisfying than jumping to new routes right as another one reaches resolution. Also, the worldbuilding is going so slow... I can tell that there's something going on beneath the surface, but it's so disperse. I really like this story and will continue reading, this is only a collection of my thoughts.