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thank you for relaying my thoughts exactly, i'm so dissapointed because this manhwa's story, art and characters have so much more potential
I feel u sm. I've only read upto chap 7 cause it feels so empty and bland. I heard a lot of hype on this on tik--- and i really want to read female mc in a dungeon concept. But well, the story feels so self-inserted au. I can't resonate with it. ╥﹏╥
This have so much potential if not for 1) the fuckin translation and 2) the undermining of MC's father death cuz whoever the fuck author is, bro's prob fatherless.
Tbh what's the point of making mc have that big of a family if they're not going to contribute for her growth. If the author didn't know how to develop those characters, it's better to not include them at all. It's a poor choice since they have so many potential but was downgraded to simply be "mc's family" and not having their own personalities. They have zero relevant whatsoever to the current mc emotional, physical and mental well-being as if portrayed in the manhwa right now.
The pace was a big whole ass of a mess and let's not even start talking about their mother. God. Especially their mother. Really hate the flashbacks too. To pinpoint the whole anguish to the father and burn his stuff, not remembering any of the memories? The choices mc make as a child to cover the pain? There's so many things that could be unfold yet the author wrap it up just like that? Bro. Bro. *internal scream* That arc was so bad that even the anger towards the grandma are barely felt? It was such a ruthless scene too since the fathers death were buried just like that. Not even a bit of explanation. It's like the author is saying "that's just how she is lol"
If you read between the lines, you can somehow relate that flashbacks to mc's personality but it was so poorly executed that honestly I only connect the dots after reading some of the comments which is as confused as I am with the translation but manage to do better.
New characters keep popping out of nowhere too when the already existing one are barely mentioned that their presence leave no impact at all.
MC is young and she's not evil or anything so I'm fine with the way she conduct her life but dear lord she's so bland and I don't see where the story is going. Take an example orv or just general popular and well-received manhwa. Most of them in one way or another give a brief introduction of what's the whole thing their story are all about. Even with mediocre mc, if you can give out an interesting story plotline or side characters to make up for that generic mc trope, it can rivaled the one that have both.
I'm guessing the author is aiming for the other type which is generic trope but outstanding mc but let's be honest, it didn't fucking work out.
I'm pissed because it could've been good and it was good the first few chapters but the constant insistent that the mc is powerful and nothing can fazed her with literally zero plot and aim for future content is just not it man. The characters was amazing too and the drawing is top-tier.
I don't usually comment on something I don't like but man I am so fucking disappointed because I do like it a first and I'm fucking hyped since the mc is a female?
Even if you got the translation right, the poor execution can barely make it up. It's a fine read if you have nothing in your reading list at the moment or for some light read (if you like this type of mc ofc since it's not everyone cup of tea) but to expect it to get better is highly unlikely.
Honestly, idk if it's even the author's fault for the poor execution since I haven't read the novel but there's usually a very small chance for the artist to mess up big time like this. Whatever it is, it's definitely a huge disappointment.
Kudos to those who had read the novel and helped others to understand the story btw, may your pillow is warm on both side everyday (๑•ㅂ•)و✧ ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶