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LoliShi ^_^ April 17, 2024 1:20 am

And after allat that muscle brained horse still can’t think about anyone but himself?? How incredibly fucked up in the head do you have to be to repeatedly rape someone, lash out at them almost everyday and not care for them at all?

These characters have literally NO depth to them at ALL. That muscle brained horse can only think for itself and doesn’t think consequences are a thing!
Dan is just a soggy dish cloth! After all he’s been through, and the obvious power imbalance he still thinks a game of jenga cancels it out.
Neither of them are capable of thinking about complex stuff, they have zero depth!!!
NOT a good read, do better, author!

Responses
    menluvr April 17, 2024 3:11 am

    so true, the only good thing is the art. this is literally slop for those weird teenage girls with yaoi fetishes

    ad3line. April 17, 2024 5:05 am

    So true, this is literally js a retarded stereotype of bottom and top bl’s, top is abusive and rapes ppl for the life of them and the bottom is legit js a little retarded weakling. This story has no flavor AT ALL whatsoever and atp, I’ll just drop this, the author better not even continue the story AT ALL cs its so trash

    LoliShi ^_^ April 17, 2024 4:33 pm
    so true, the only good thing is the art. this is literally slop for those weird teenage girls with yaoi fetishes menluvr

    Hey watch out lil bro that description sounds awfully similar to the stereotypical fujoshi! BUT THATS SO REAL!!! We need to stop producing stuff like this it’s just an actual waste of talent and time