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Its so good BUT I HAVE CRITIQUES

Jiló April 18, 2024 4:11 am

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Its super good don't get me wrong but all the talking about how "isnt your fault to rape" its bozarre for me, it sucked
The talking about "eating you" its so much better because it plays with the BEAST premice
I love it

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    Meh April 18, 2024 5:44 am

    That icked me too but like I kind of understand. The MC empathizes a lot and he himself knows that, since there's even a chapter where he tried to refuse to empathize towards the ML to protect himself. He understood that the Alpha's instinct could override their agency (in sex or beast predation in general) which isn't uncommon in their world, apparently. It's the same for MC as well, having his thoughts overriden during his heat by the desire to be bitten by ML. They can't beat their biology, which really sucks for both MC and ML.