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The story has such good potential but its SO POORLY EXECUTED T-T I had such a hard time un...

Maida April 19, 2024 10:52 pm

The story has such good potential but its SO POORLY EXECUTED T-T I had such a hard time understanding Im so pissed... And the translation made it even more confusing im sorry

Responses
    LeRain April 19, 2024 11:46 pm

    Huh, it’s ok. Do you want me to explain?

    Maida April 20, 2024 11:02 am
    Huh, it’s ok. Do you want me to explain? LeRain

    I did get it after re-reading the chapter again and again but... its the parce of the story in itself that is very confusing

    Insertbratwurst May 2, 2024 6:48 pm
    I did get it after re-reading the chapter again and again but... its the parce of the story in itself that is very confusing Maida

    If you mean chapter 1, I totally get you. It was honestly frustrating to read. Clearly written by someone who knew the plot, yet failed to take into consideration that the readers don’t know the plot yet. Like hearing someone talk about details from a book they’ve already read that you haven’t even started yet.

    LeRain May 2, 2024 7:16 pm
    If you mean chapter 1, I totally get you. It was honestly frustrating to read. Clearly written by someone who knew the plot, yet failed to take into consideration that the readers don’t know the plot yet. Lik... Insertbratwurst

    Chapter 1 was ok Imo. Not complicated at all. Author just gave necessary information, it’s the introduction to the story. Sometimes introductions like that start even from the middle of the story and later go back to the beginning.