Will the pacing and tone continues to be this slow? I've gotten bored from 2 chapters but tried hanging on for 30 chapters in case it gets better. Well the story did progress and I get some future plot foreshadowing which made me curious but the storytelling is so monotonous, made it feels lackluster. Is this adapted from a novel? Feels like the storyboard can be improved and less drawn-out. Too much narration explaining panel, telling reader instead of showing it. Example: "we drank tea while waiting" - tea picture "We continued the pleasant talk again while waiting" - picture of everybody smiling and laughing "I'm happy our family can be together like this" multiple times almost every few chapters. The first few times said by different characters are enough to show their feelings. I get it. In novel yes use words to describe those but I feel like just drawings should be able to show the atmosphere, feelings, story. I guess that's the difference between shounen manhwa with rating above 9.3 and this one with rating 9.0. it's a similar issue I have with "volcanic age" manhwa, compared to "return of mount hua sect", "the S-classes that I raised", "story of a low ranked soldier becoming a monarch" etc. they're better adapter into manhwa. Example of outstanding shoujo manhwa adapted from novel, "my mom entered a contract marriage", "broken ring". The arts are chef kiss
Will the pacing and tone continues to be this slow? I've gotten bored from 2 chapters but tried hanging on for 30 chapters in case it gets better. Well the story did progress and I get some future plot foreshadowing which made me curious but the storytelling is so monotonous, made it feels lackluster. Is this adapted from a novel? Feels like the storyboard can be improved and less drawn-out.
Too much narration explaining panel, telling reader instead of showing it. Example:
"we drank tea while waiting" - tea picture
"We continued the pleasant talk again while waiting" - picture of everybody smiling and laughing
"I'm happy our family can be together like this" multiple times almost every few chapters. The first few times said by different characters are enough to show their feelings. I get it.
In novel yes use words to describe those but I feel like just drawings should be able to show the atmosphere, feelings, story.
I guess that's the difference between shounen manhwa with rating above 9.3 and this one with rating 9.0. it's a similar issue I have with "volcanic age" manhwa, compared to "return of mount hua sect", "the S-classes that I raised", "story of a low ranked soldier becoming a monarch" etc. they're better adapter into manhwa.
Example of outstanding shoujo manhwa adapted from novel, "my mom entered a contract marriage", "broken ring". The arts are chef kiss